Just a Backbeat.
I really enjoy the melody you have going. A good way to make a minor tone sound pleasant. Gets some lyrics down then maybe I can give you a ten, but a background beat is just classified as instrumental. Just because you add acoustic drum samples doesn't really classify it as hip-hop. The beat that you have composed would fall into the category of old school hip-hop anyway. Keep writing my man. I like your instrumental composing.
I appreciate the criticism, but I think that using drums that sounds like they're acoustic doesn't really make an instrumental to be oldschool.. well maybe i'm wrong.
Thanks anyway ;)
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Overall you did a great job remaking this song. The vocals weren't really in time with the instruments at one point. I'd give it a ten if you took the time to fix that.
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